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Universal Expansion by ~athraxio:iconathraxio:



There's dark matter between the hearts
That used to be so close.
Suddenly we reach and find
We're out of each other's grasp.
The umbilical cord is being cut
That ties us all together.
The stars are going out on their own
And leaving each other behind.

We're all just rushing forward, forward,
Towards the imminent black hole.
Rushing to keep up with an expanding universe.
The stars are turning colder now,
And losing sense of gravity.
Standing on my own in an expanding universe.

The dark matter's growing
In the void that's been left bare.
The light from the stars
Just doesn't go as far anymore.
We're reaching for what used to be
Beneath our fingertips.
Standing all alone, we find
We've left ourselves behind.

We're all just rushing forward, forward,
Towards the starting line.
Rushing to keep up with an expanding universe.
The stars are growing dimmer now,
And running out of energy.
Standing on my own in an expanding universe.

I remember way back when,
The night sky was brighter then,
The universe was smaller then,
And we could find each other.
Soon there will come a day,
When you look to the stars and say,
"There aren't as many as yesterday."
And we can't find each other.
©2008-2009 ~athraxio
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Author's Comments

Yep, a poem based off of earth science class. Can anyone say nerd? :XD:

This is based off of the law of universal expansion. The teacher was telling us about how the number of stars stays constant as the universe expands, so one day, there simply won't be as many stars left in the night sky. That inspired a few lines of this, which I bounced around in my head for a while. The rest of it all just came in one go (about 15 minutes ago, actually). It reminded me of how humans just rush to expand and get bigger and better, and they distance themselves from each other and grow colder by doing so.

I tried to repeat elements and phrasing within the poem. Also, this may become a song sometime. Enjoy, all!

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:iconcamelherderlover:
I like that, it was very nice :D

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Why thank you! :bow:

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Awesome!
Gorgeous rhythm! :)


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Thank you very much! And thanks for the fav as well! :D

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Of course! Awesome work. ^.^


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You're welcome :D

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Oh I like it a lot!

You still have your writing skills! :#1:

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:D Why thank you, ma'am! :hug:

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